詩の分析

Cartography of Silence”

Original Poetry

Translation

Cartography of Silence”

We called the silence ours, thinking a word could hold what slips away, as if the night, loosely tied with our time, could preserve all our delicate forms. But silence shifts — it leans on walls, listens back, responds without sound, gathers every echo as it drops and hides meaning deep underground. There is a map no compass can read, drawn not with lines but with pauses, where every absence quietly admits to something sensed, but never fully seen. We once traced it with doubtful fingers, afraid to lose the familiar edges, yet every path we tried to follow led us back to a voice that wasn't ours. And time — the careful editor of light — erased the margins where we hid, rephrased our memories in black and white and left contradictions side by side. So now we speak as if the words were true, as if they didn't shake when spoken, as if the silence wasn't moving through the delicate structure of the unspoken.

We named the silence, thinking it was ours,

as if a word could fasten what escapes,

as if the night, stitched loosely with our hours,

would keep the shape of all our fragile shapes.

But silence moves — it leans against the walls,

it listens back, it answers without sound,

it gathers every echo as it falls

and buries meaning deep beneath the ground.

There is a map no compass ever reads,

drawn not in lines but pauses in between,

where every absence quietly concedes

to something felt, but never fully seen.

We traced it once with fingers made of doubt,

afraid to lose the edges of the known,

yet every path we tried to follow out

returned us to a voice that was not our own.

And time — that careful editor of light —

erased the margins where we used to hide,

rephrased our memories in black and white

and left the contradictions side by side.

So now we speak as if the words were true,

as if they did not tremble when they’re said,

as if the silence wasn’t passing through

the fragile architecture of the unsaid.

Explanation

Adrienne Rich's poem 'Cartography of Silence' explores the complex relationship between silence and communication. The poem suggests that silence is not merely an absence of sound but a dynamic presence that interacts with us. It describes how we attempt to define and control silence with words, yet silence remains elusive and powerful, shaping our experiences and perceptions. The poem uses the metaphor of a map to illustrate how silence is charted not by visible lines but by the spaces in between, highlighting the intangible nature of what is felt but not seen. Rich reflects on the passage of time and its role in reshaping memories and identities, emphasizing the fragility and contradictions inherent in human expression. The poem ultimately questions the reliability of language and the truths we construct, as silence permeates the spaces between words, challenging our understanding of reality.

Word Dictionary10

Word	Easy Meaning	Translation	Pron.
cartography	map-making	making maps	kar-tog-ra-fee
fasten	secure	to hold tightly	fas-ten
fragile	delicate	breakable	fra-jil
leans	rests	rests against	leenz
echo	reverberation	reflected sound	ek-oh
concedes	admits	accepts	kon-seedz
editor	reviser	person who changes text	ed-i-tor
architecture	structure	design of structures	ar-ki-tek-cher
tremble	shake	to shake	trem-bul
unsaid	unspoken	not said	un-sed

Poet & Context

PoetAdrienne Rich

Era20th century

Adrienne Cecile Rich was an American poet, essayist, and feminist, known for her influential work in the second half of the 20th century. She brought attention to the oppression of women and lesbians in poetic discourse and advocated for a flexible form of feminism. Rich declined the National Medal of Arts in protest of political actions against arts funding.

View on Wikipedia

WhenLate 20th century

WhyAdrienne Rich's work often explores themes of silence, identity, and feminism. This poem reflects on the nature of silence and communication, examining how silence can be both a presence and an absence. Rich's poetry frequently addresses the complexities of identity and the limitations of language.

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

SilenceCommunicationIdentityTime

Literary devices

Metaphor: Silence is described as a map and a presence.Personification: Silence is given human-like qualities, such as listening and answering.Imagery: Vivid descriptions of silence and its effects.Alliteration: Repeated consonant sounds, such as 'silence moves'.

詩の分析

Cartography of Silence”

Original Poetry

Translation

Cartography of Silence”

We named the silence, thinking it was ours,

as if a word could fasten what escapes,

as if the night, stitched loosely with our hours,

would keep the shape of all our fragile shapes.

But silence moves — it leans against the walls,

it listens back, it answers without sound,

it gathers every echo as it falls

and buries meaning deep beneath the ground.

There is a map no compass ever reads,

drawn not in lines but pauses in between,

where every absence quietly concedes

to something felt, but never fully seen.

We traced it once with fingers made of doubt,

afraid to lose the edges of the known,

yet every path we tried to follow out

returned us to a voice that was not our own.

And time — that careful editor of light —

erased the margins where we used to hide,

rephrased our memories in black and white

and left the contradictions side by side.

So now we speak as if the words were true,

as if they did not tremble when they’re said,

as if the silence wasn’t passing through

the fragile architecture of the unsaid.

Explanation

Word Dictionary10

Word	Easy Meaning	Translation	Pron.
cartography	map-making	making maps	kar-tog-ra-fee
fasten	secure	to hold tightly	fas-ten
fragile	delicate	breakable	fra-jil
leans	rests	rests against	leenz
echo	reverberation	reflected sound	ek-oh
concedes	admits	accepts	kon-seedz
editor	reviser	person who changes text	ed-i-tor
architecture	structure	design of structures	ar-ki-tek-cher
tremble	shake	to shake	trem-bul
unsaid	unspoken	not said	un-sed

Poet & Context

PoetAdrienne Rich

Era20th century

View on Wikipedia

WhenLate 20th century

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

SilenceCommunicationIdentityTime

Literary devices