詩の分析

An Iron Balloon

Original Poetry

Translation

An Iron Balloon

You bring the main part, and I'll bring the small bits.

You provide the bread and I'll provide the crumbs.

Let's enjoy our meal of nothingness

Let us feed on our banquet of emptiness

Like ghosts at a baptism, thieves at a funeral.

Like ghouls at a christening, body snatchers at the wake.

Let's search for the smallest pieces of forever that might have been missed

Let us scavenge for the barest morsels of eternity that may have gone overlooked  Slipped under the layered dust,

Hidden under layers of dust,

Under the sediment left by crumbling ruins of once proud memories now long obsolete.

Under the remains left by falling apart memories that were once important but are now forgotten.

The mirror shatters into a trillion pieces, but who's counting anyway?

The mirror breaks into countless pieces, but who cares?

What is there left of the life once imagined?

What remains of the life we once dreamed of?

Once rising above us, over the years,

Once it was above us, over time,

Once inflated by virtues and memories, a

Once filled with good qualities and memories,

Now collapsed like a defeated Zeppelin;

Now fallen like a crashed airship;

Under an Iron Balloon.

Under a heavy, unyielding weight.

Explanation

The poem 'An Iron Balloon' by Igor Goldkind uses stark imagery to convey a sense of existential emptiness and the decay of once cherished ideals and memories. The metaphor of a 'banquet of emptiness' suggests a feast that is devoid of substance, highlighting the futility of seeking fulfillment in a hollow existence. The imagery of 'ghouls at a christening' and 'body snatchers at the wake' evokes a sense of macabre scavenging, reflecting on the remnants of life and eternity that are overlooked and forgotten. The shattered mirror symbolizes the fragmentation of identity and the disintegration of once cohesive dreams and aspirations. The poem culminates in the image of a 'defeated Zeppelin,' a once majestic airship now collapsed under the weight of an 'Iron Balloon,' representing the oppressive burden of reality and disillusionment. Through these vivid images, Goldkind explores themes of loss, decay, and the relentless passage of time.

Word Dictionary15

Word	Easy Meaning	Translation	Pron.
crumbs	small pieces	tiny bits of food or fragments	kruhmz
banquet	feast	a large meal or celebration	bang-kwit
ghouls	ghosts	evil spirits or monsters	goolz
christening	baptism	a religious ceremony for naming a child	kris-uh-ning
scavenge	search	to look for and collect	skav-inj
morsels	small pieces	tiny portions of food	mor-suhlz
sediment	deposits	material that settles at the bottom	sed-uh-muhnt
obsolete	outdated	no longer in use	ob-suh-leet
Zeppelin	airship	a large airship or blimp	zep-lin
virtues	good qualities	moral excellence	vur-chooz
eternity	forever	infinite time	ee-tur-ni-tee
trillion	a huge number	one million million	tril-yuhn
shatters	breaks	to break into pieces	shat-urz
inflated	filled	expanded with air or gas	in-flay-tid
collapsed	fell down	to fall or cave in	kuh-lapst

Poet & Context

PoetIgor Goldkind

EraContemporary

Igor Goldkind is a contemporary poet known for his work that often explores themes of existentialism and the human condition. His poetry is characterized by its vivid imagery and philosophical depth.

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WhenOctober 1, 2022

WhyThe poem reflects on themes of existential emptiness and the decay of once cherished memories and ideals. It uses vivid imagery to explore the futility and fragmentation of life.

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

Existential emptinessDecay of memoriesDisillusionmentFragmentation of identity

Literary devices

Metaphor: 'banquet of emptiness' suggests a feast without substance.Imagery: 'ghouls at a christening' evokes a haunting visual.Symbolism: 'shattered mirror' represents fragmented identity.Allusion: 'defeated Zeppelin' refers to the collapse of grand ideals.

詩の分析

An Iron Balloon

Original Poetry

Translation

An Iron Balloon

You bring the main part, and I'll bring the small bits.

You provide the bread and I'll provide the crumbs.

Let's enjoy our meal of nothingness

Let us feed on our banquet of emptiness

Like ghosts at a baptism, thieves at a funeral.

Like ghouls at a christening, body snatchers at the wake.

Let's search for the smallest pieces of forever that might have been missed

Let us scavenge for the barest morsels of eternity that may have gone overlooked  Slipped under the layered dust,

Hidden under layers of dust,

Under the sediment left by crumbling ruins of once proud memories now long obsolete.

Under the remains left by falling apart memories that were once important but are now forgotten.

The mirror shatters into a trillion pieces, but who's counting anyway?

The mirror breaks into countless pieces, but who cares?

What is there left of the life once imagined?

What remains of the life we once dreamed of?

Once rising above us, over the years,

Once it was above us, over time,

Once inflated by virtues and memories, a

Once filled with good qualities and memories,

Now collapsed like a defeated Zeppelin;

Now fallen like a crashed airship;

Under an Iron Balloon.

Under a heavy, unyielding weight.

Explanation

Word Dictionary15

Word	Easy Meaning	Translation	Pron.
crumbs	small pieces	tiny bits of food or fragments	kruhmz
banquet	feast	a large meal or celebration	bang-kwit
ghouls	ghosts	evil spirits or monsters	goolz
christening	baptism	a religious ceremony for naming a child	kris-uh-ning
scavenge	search	to look for and collect	skav-inj
morsels	small pieces	tiny portions of food	mor-suhlz
sediment	deposits	material that settles at the bottom	sed-uh-muhnt
obsolete	outdated	no longer in use	ob-suh-leet
Zeppelin	airship	a large airship or blimp	zep-lin
virtues	good qualities	moral excellence	vur-chooz
eternity	forever	infinite time	ee-tur-ni-tee
trillion	a huge number	one million million	tril-yuhn
shatters	breaks	to break into pieces	shat-urz
inflated	filled	expanded with air or gas	in-flay-tid
collapsed	fell down	to fall or cave in	kuh-lapst

Poet & Context

PoetIgor Goldkind

EraContemporary

Igor Goldkind is a contemporary poet known for his work that often explores themes of existentialism and the human condition. His poetry is characterized by its vivid imagery and philosophical depth.

View on Wikipedia

WhenOctober 1, 2022

WhyThe poem reflects on themes of existential emptiness and the decay of once cherished memories and ideals. It uses vivid imagery to explore the futility and fragmentation of life.

FormFree verse

Themes & More

Themes

Existential emptinessDecay of memoriesDisillusionmentFragmentation of identity

Literary devices